2024-05-16
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
WHAT WERE YOUR HABITS BEFORE THAT YOU’RE NOT DOING ANYMORE?
When I was young, I would cry every day, On weekends, I would fight my older brother.
I would always luse. Sometime, I would even more. because I never won him.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for the great talk as usual. Your answers made me remember how I fought with my siblings a lot when we were kids, too. I think it is normal in every household. I appreciate your candid and fun responses. Please take care, and see you!
--Teacher Anji
WHAT WERE YOUR HABITS BEFORE THAT YOU’RE NOT DOING ANYMORE?
When I was young, I would cry every day, On weekends, I would fight my older brother.
When I was young, I would cry every day, On weekends, I would fight my older brother.
>> When I was young, I would cry every day. On weekends, I would fight my older brother.
I would always luse. Sometime, I would even more. because I never won him.
I would always luse. Sometime, I would even more. because I never won him.
>> I would always lose. Sometimes, I would fight even more because I never won against him.
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