2024.06.11

2024-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Anji

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HOMEWORK: 1. WHAT IS YOUR MAJOR? I am taking up secretary officer I took up this major because my tast score is raw. My Family said that taking up this major will be happy. I’m not glad that I took this major because i don,t do that.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms [이름]! Thank you for your response. i am sorry that you were not able to take the major that you really wanted. I wonder what it was that you really like. I hope you\'ll be able to do what interests you. See you again!
--Teacher Anji

1. WHAT IS YOUR MAJOR?
I am taking up secretary officer
>> I took up secretarial course.
I took up this major because my tast score is raw.
>> I took this major because my test score was low.
My Family said that taking up this major will be happy.
>> My family said that taking up this major, I would be happy.
I’m not glad that I took this major because i don,t do that.
>> I’m not glad that I took this major because I\'m not interested in it.

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