2024.06.24
학생이 쓴 원문
2. WHAT COULD HAPPEN TO YOUR COUNTRY IN 10 YEARS?
My country could be famous in the world. The people in my country could make k-pop stars.
We all could great success if we really tried. I believe we could become famous country in the world.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! Korea is already a very famous country in the world because of K-pop and K-dramas. I think it is one of the reasons why people from all over the world became interested n=in visiting your country as well. I hope my country could do the same in the future. Please take care!
--Teacher Anji
My country could be famous in the world.
>> CORRECT
The people in my country could make k-pop stars.
>> CORRECT
We all could great success if we really tried.
We all could great success if we really tried.
>> We all could achieve great success if we really tried.
I believe we could become famous country in the world.
>> i believe we could become a famous country in the world.
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