2024.07.05
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE PRESIDENT OF NORTH KOREA?
I find the President of North Korea to have good manners . I think even other people find him same things.
It would be very difficult to find someone to rule. but I think people from North Korea should find freedome.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! I find your idea a controversial opinion about the N. Korean leader. Thank you for sharing such interesting insight. Let us practice more again soon. See you!
---teacher Anji
WHAT DO YOU THINK OF THE PRESIDENT OF NORTH KOREA?
I find the President of North Korea to have good manners .
>> CORRECT
I find the President of North Korea to have good manners .
>> CORRECT
I think even other people find him same things.
>> I think even other people find the same.
It would be very difficult to find someone to rule. but I think people from North Korea should find freedome.
It would be very difficult to find someone to rule. but I think people from North Korea should find freedome.
>>It would be very difficult to find someone to rule, but I think the people from North Korea should find freedom.
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