2024.07.09
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMWORK:
HOW CAN YOU MAKE YOUR PARTNER FEEL SPECIAL?
To make my partner feel special, I will give to praise. It\'s not important to give bad thought for you. The most important thing is to give the more times. This will give help for you.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for these great ideas you shared. Although there were some errors, the idea is really good. Giving praises won\'t hurt you. Please take care, and see you soon!
--Teacher Anji
To make my partner feel special, I will give to praise.
>> To make my partner feel special, I will give him praises.
OR >> To make my partner feel special, I will praise him.
It\'s not important to give bad thought for you.
>> It is not important to give bad thoughts for you.
The most important thing is to give the more times.
>> The most important thing is to give more time.
This will give help for you.
>> They will give assistance to you.
OR >> They will give you a hand/help.
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