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2024-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Anji

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HOMEWORK: WHEN YOU INVITE SOME FRIENDS OVER, WHAT ARE THE ACTIVITIES THAT EVERYONE MAY ENJOY? My friends and I may play or drink in my house. We may also stay a few days when we were drunk. My friends may always come to my house. They may be to that because i live alone.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [이름]! It sounds exciting to be your friend It must be fun to have someone to go to and have fun together. Let us share more again soon. Take care!
--Teacher Anji

My friends and I may play or drink in my house.
>> CORRECT
We may also stay a few days when we were drunk.
>> CORRECT
My friends may always come to my house.
>> CORRECT
They may be to that because i live alone.
>> They may do that because I live alone.

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