2024.08.12
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
In 10 years, I want to become a good adult for yung children.
Becoming good adult has been an important dream of mine.
To become good adult is something I’ve really wanted.
I really hope I could become good adult .
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! Your dream sounds so simple yet difficult at the same time. It is challenging to be a good and responsible adult especially in front of kids. I hope all adults have this in mind. Let us talk again soon. See you!
--Teacher Anji
In 10 years, I want to become a good adult for yung children.
>> In 10 years, I want to become a good adult for young children.
Becoming good adult has been an important dream of mine.
Becoming good adult has been an important dream of mine.
>> CORRECT
To become good adult is something I’ve really wanted.
To become good adult is something I’ve really wanted.
>> CORRECT
I really hope I could become good adult .
I really hope I could become good adult .
>> CORRECT
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