2024.08.16
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I think dentists can’t do to make a visit more pleasurable because they also don’t like visit the dentistry.
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Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! It may be difficult to make it pleasurable for patients, but for kids, giving rewards or toys after a visit to the dentist might help make the experience better.
- T. Caitlyn
I think dentists can’t do to make a visit more pleasurable because they also don’t like visit the dentistry.
>> I think dentists can\'t do much to make a visit more pleasurable because even they don’t enjoy visiting the dentist themselves.
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