2024.08.20
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
1. What does your birthstone stand for?
My birthstone is a Diamond. In my culture, it means forever love.
It would mean immortal if we wear it all the time. Because Diamond is hard.
My birthstone has a special means.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]! It\'s nice to know the meaning of your birthstone. Diamonds are made beautiful from polishing, and so are people. We become better with all the experience we have, good and bad. Please shine bright just like your birthstone. See you!
--Teacher Anji
1. What does your birthstone stand for?
My birthstone is a diamond. In my culture, it means forever love.
My birthstone is a diamond. In my culture, it means forever love.
>> CORRECT
It would mean immortal if we wear it all the time. Because Diamond is hard.
It would mean immortal if we wear it all the time. Because Diamond is hard.
>> It would mean immortal if we wear it all the time because diamond is hard.
My birthstone has a special means.
My birthstone has a special means.
>> My birthstone has a special meaning.
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