2025.02.26 homework!

2025-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. My Answer I\'m prefer attending a live performance. Even though it cost a lot of money attending a live performance, Field give me significant feel. In particular, I recommend watching go to the baseball stadium in person, This memory never don\'t forget your life.

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework carefully because the result was amazing. I expect to receive more expressive and meaningful ideas from you. Anyway, have a great day! Do whatever makes you happy. Have fun while the weather is pretty good. See you again!

-Teacher Jeny-

I\'m prefer attending a live performance.

>>I\'d prefer to attend a live performance.
Even though it cost a lot of money attending a live performance,

>>Even though it costs a lot to attend a live performance.
Field give me significant feel.

>>The field gives me a significant feel.
In particular, I recommend watching go to the baseball stadium in person,

>>In particular, I recommend watching at the baseball stadium in person,
This memory never don\'t forget your life.

>>This memory will never be forgotten in your lifetime.

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