2025.03.04 homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
What period of history would you like to go back and live in?
My answer
If possible, I will comeback to my young-age. At that time I\'m 23~29 years old.
That is why this generation is no worries about future.
Only, I just had fun with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Determination and perseverance move the world; thinking that others will do it for you is a sure way to fail. Determination is one of the key factors of improving your ability to speak and understand a conversation. In your case I know that you are determined to improve your skills in English.
T. Jeny
If possible, I will comeback to my young-age.
>>If possible, I will come back to my young age.
At that time I\'m 23~29 years old.
>>I would be around 23-29 years old.
That is why this generation is no worries about future.
That is why this generation is no worries about future.
>>That is why this generation has no worries about the future.
Only, I just had fun with my friends.
Only, I just had fun with my friends.
>>I will only have fun with my friends.
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