2025.03.05 homework!
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What is the most challenging part of your job or your studies? What is the most rewarding part?
The hardest part is world-economy downturn in my job.
My job is a oversea dept manager in our company.
For example, Ukraine-Russia war is make hard to me.
On the other hand
The most rewarding part is receive hopeful message from the our buyer.
They say that \"Thank you for your support\"
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>>The world economy downturn has had the hardest effect on my job.
My job is a oversea dept manager in our company.
My job is a oversea dept manager in our company.
>>I am working as an overseas department manager in my company.
For example, Ukraine-Russia war is make hard to me.
>>Thus the Ukraine-Russia war made a big impact on my job.
On the other hand The most rewarding part is receive hopeful message from the our buyer.
For example, Ukraine-Russia war is make hard to me.
>>Thus the Ukraine-Russia war made a big impact on my job.
On the other hand The most rewarding part is receive hopeful message from the our buyer.
>>On the other hand, the most rewarding part of my job is receiving hopeful messages from our buyers.
They say that \"Thank you for your support\"
>>They say, \"Thank you for your support\"
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