2025.03.10 homework!
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How would you describe the population of your country?
My country population is about 50 million people living it.
The majority of people in Downtown area.
Nowdays, Population is steadily decrease.
Cause economic environment is not good.
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My country population is about 50 million people living it.
>>My country\'s population is about 50 million.
The majority of people in Downtown area.
The majority of people in Downtown area.
>>The majority of the people are living in the Downtown area.
Nowdays, Population is steadily decrease.
Nowdays, Population is steadily decrease.
>>Nowadays, the population is steadily decreasing.
Cause economic environment is not good.
Cause economic environment is not good.
>>Cause the economic environment is not good.
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