2025.03.19 homework!
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Whose advice do you follow more, your parents’ or your friends’ advice?
This is good question.
I think it will depend on the situation.
First, For live a life, I follow my parents advice.
They advice is lead to right way.
On the other hand, My friend\'s advice is helpful for Social life.
That is why currently, we works the same generation.
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T. Jeny
>>This is a good question.
I think it will depend on the situation.
I think it will depend on the situation.
>>correct
First, For live a life, I follow my parents advice.
First, For live a life, I follow my parents advice.
>>For concerns about life, I will follow my parent\'s advice first.
They advice is lead to right way.
>>I will prioritize their advice right away.
On the other hand, My friend\'s advice is helpful for Social life.
On the other hand, My friend\'s advice is helpful for Social life.
>>On the other hand, My friend\'s advice is helpful for my social life.
That is why currently, we works the same generation.
That is why currently, we works the same generation.
>>That\'s why, we work together,
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