2025.03.26 homework!

2025-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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When I heard that ambition, first I image a politician. I review that my life, I don\'t think about the ambition. If my job is sports player, I will focus on the ambition.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]

I would always appreciate the kindness and optimism you\'ve shown.  In addition, you always acknowledge and listen to corrections

given to you. Keep doing that because it would help you a lot to improve faster.

Thank you for your homework.

Always Smile!!!

T. Jeny


When I heard that ambition, first I image a politician.
>>When I hear the word ambition, I image the politicians first.
I review that my life, I don\'t think about the ambition.
>>If I will review my life, I think I didn\'t have an ambition.
If my job is sports player, I will focus on the ambition.
>>If I were an athlete, I would focus on my ambition.

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