2025.04.02 homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think bullying should be considered a crime, or is it part of growing up?
: I think bullying should be considered.
Bullying can be a joke for someone.
However It is considered inconvenient to others.
So, It is important to educate from an early age.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.
T. Jeny
>>I think bullying should be considered as a crime.
Bullying can be a joke for someone.
Bullying can be a joke for someone.
>>correct
However it is considered inconvenient to others.
However it is considered inconvenient to others.
>>However, it is inconvenient to others.
So, It is important to educate from an early age.
So, It is important to educate from an early age.
>>correct
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