2025.04.09 homework!

2025-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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How can the English language help you advance in your career? English is help me develop my career. As I said that my job is oversea dept. So, English language is useful for my work. continuously, I strive to upgrade my English skill.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

I do encourage you to continue learning English. One of the key factors is to have patience. Nice job on your homework today, you are improving. Just persevere and you\'ll see yourself speaking the language well.

I hope you\'ll have a wonderful day!!!

Have a great day!!!!

T. Jeny

How can the English language help you advance in your career?

English is help me develop my career.

>>The English language can help me develop my career.
As I said that my job is oversea dept.

>>I am working in the overseas department.
So, English language is useful for my work.

>>So, the English language is useful for my work.
continuously, I strive to upgrade my English skill.

>>I continuously strive to upgrade my English skill.

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