2025.04.15 homework!
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Is it easy to get a job after graduation in your country?
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Hmm, First of all, It depends on the types of jobs.
But generally nowdays, It is difficult get a job after graduation.
See the reasons below.
1. High competitive ratio of job seekers
2. Low a labor wage
3. Graduated people are find convenient job
Anyway, I hope the economic stuation will improve near the future.
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It is a good question teacher!
>>correct
Hmm, First of all, It depends on the types of jobs.
Hmm, First of all, It depends on the types of jobs.
>>correct
But generally nowdays, It is difficult get a job after graduation.
>>But genrally nowadays, it is difficult to get a job after graduation.
See the reasons below.
>>correct
1. High competitive ratio of job seekers
>>correct
2. Low a labor wage
>>low labor wage
3. Graduated people are find convenient job
>>Newly graduates are looking for a convenient job
Anyway, I hope the economic stuation will improve near the future.
>>Anyway, I hope the economic situation will improve in the near future
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