2025.04.24 homework!
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What do you think is life all about?
Life is
Sometimes, I endure what I want to do
Something you don\'t want to do
When you live like that, you realize that the most important thing is health
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Hello [이름]!!
Thank you for your homework!!!
I am very happy that you are eager to learn a lot of things and you want to know which field that you need to practice more. It is a good thing and it means that you are interested in learning a lot of things. I commend you for that.
T. Jeny
>>Life is sometimes enduring what I want to do.
Something you don\'t want to do
>>And sometimes just doing what you want to do.
When you live like that, you realize that the most important thing is health
>>Through those experiences, you can realize that health is the most important thing.
Something you don\'t want to do
>>And sometimes just doing what you want to do.
When you live like that, you realize that the most important thing is health
>>Through those experiences, you can realize that health is the most important thing.
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