2025.05.09 homework!
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What invention would you like to invent?
The invention I would like to develop is a device that can display the condition of my body as a percentage, similar to how a smartphone shows its battery level.
It would allow for a simple check to instantly indicate my overall physical condition in percentage.
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>>correct
The invention I would like to develop is a device that can display the condition of my body as a percentage, similar to how a smartphone shows its battery level.
>>correct
It would allow for a simple check to instantly indicate my overall physical condition in percentage.
It would allow for a simple check to instantly indicate my overall physical condition in percentage.
>>It would allow a simple check to instantly indicate the overall percentage of my physical condition.
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