2025.09.18 Homework

2025-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think public transport is convenient. There are three subway lines. There are various bus routes. But subway station is far from my house. I want increase subway line.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Sir [이름]!

I think public transport is convenient.

>>> correct

There are three subway lines.

>>> correct

There are various bus routes.

>>> correct

>>> OR: There are also three bus routes.

But subway station is far from my house.

>>> However, the subway station is far from my house.

I want increase subway line.

>>> I hope they increase the subway lines.

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