2025.10.14 Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
I like korea 4 seasons. First. Sping is warm. but a lot of dust. I wearing the mask. Second. Summer is very hot. I often go to swimming.
Fall is romanic. Tree is coloful. and my best season. because go to camping. fanally winter is very cold. I don\'t want go outside. I love in the house.
강사 첨삭
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I like korea 4 seasons.
>>> I like Korea\'s 4 seasons.
>>> OR: I like all the four seasons in Korea.
First. Sping is warm. but a lot of dust.
>>> First, spring is warm, but there\'s a lot of fine dust.
I wearing the mask.
>>> I need to wear a mask when going out.
Second. Summer is very hot.
>>> Second, summer is very hot.
I often go to swimming.
>>> correct
Fall is romanic.
Fall is romanic.
>>> Fall is romantic.
Tree is coloful. and my best season. because go to camping.
>>> The trees are colorful and it is the best season for me because I can go camping.
fanally winter is very cold. I don\'t want go outside.
>>> Finally, winter is very cold, so I don\'t want to go outside.
I love in the house.
>>> I love being/staying in the house.
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