2025.11.06 Homework
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I think my daily routine is boring. I want change my daily routine. I wake up early in the morning and i go to farm. I grow up the vegetable all day. I hope near the nature. I don\'t want complicated and stress.
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I think my daily routine is boring.
>>> correct
I want change my daily routine.
>>> I want to change my daily routine.
>>> OR: I want change in my daily routine.
I wake up early in the morning and I go to farm.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I wake up early in the morning and I go to the farm.
I grow up the vegetable all day.
>>> I grow vegetables all day.
>>> OR: I raise vegetables all day.
I hope near the nature.
>>> I hope to be near the nature.
I don\'t want complicated and stress.
>>> I don\'t want complication and stress.
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