2025.11.11 Homework
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I think working out is keep the body and mind healthy. so we need working out.
a lot of korean father are bad body shape. Include me.
so we have to working out.
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Thank you for this, Sir [이름]! Have a great day.
I think working out is keep the body and mind healthy. so we need working out.
>>> I think working out keeps the body and mind healthy, so we need to work out.
a lot of korean father are bad body shape. Include me. so we have to working out
a lot of korean father are bad body shape. Include me. so we have to working out
>>> A lot of Korean fathers are in bad shape, so we have to work out.
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