20Jan2025-homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: People are interested in the lives of famous people. Is this okay, or should people mind their own business?
Answer : I really like GD, but I\'m not curious about his private life. I don’t want to break the illusion of him as an entertainer, and I don’t think I need to know about his personal life. If I happen to run into him on the street, I would just pass by naturally so that he can walk comfortably!
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! That is so cool of you. Nowadays, many people do not understand that celebrities are also humans and are entitled to privacy. I hope every fan has the same mindset as yours!
-T. Sonny
I really like GD, but I\'m not curious about his private life. >>Correct!
OR. I\'m all about GD, but I\'m not curious about his private life.
I don’t want to break the illusion of him as an entertainer, and I don’t think I need to know about his personal life.
>>Correct!
If I happen to run into him on the street, I would just pass by naturally so that he can walk comfortably!
>>Correct!
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