20nov2024-homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: How often do you go shopping for clothes? Do you buy new clothes when the season changes?
Answer: Usaully I bought new clothes when new season, but I always window shopping because I will checking trend. And If it\'s pretty, I put it in my shopping cart. I think about it for a few days and buy it if I don\'t get out of my mind.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! That\'s a very good strategy. You only buy something if you can\'t stop thinking about it. I\'ll take note of that.
-T. Sonny
Usaully I bought new clothes when new season, but I always window shopping because I will checking trend. >>Usually I buy new clothes at the start of the new season, but I always do window shopping to check the current fashion trends.
And If it\'s pretty, I put it in my shopping cart.
>>Correct!
I think about it for a few days and buy it if I don\'t get out of my mind.
>>I think about it for a few days and buy it if it does not leave my mind.
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