20th March
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello SPRING!
Thanks for sharing this to me.
I made the necessary corrections below.
Please review them.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Hi Teacher Shanee^^ I\'m Spring .
Did you have a good weekend?
Its quote below souds like pushing the aspires.
>>> The quote below sounds motivating and inspiring.
QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
“Learn how to be happy with what you have while you pursue all that you want.”~Jim rohn
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write about a time when you felt proud of yourself.
When having felt proud of myself is that I heard that my sister said to her friends about me.
>>> The moment I felt proud of myself was when I heard my sister talking about me with her friends.
She praised me to her friend on the phone at her room.
>>> OR: She talked highly about me when she was talking with her friend on the phone in her room.
I could got her voice at the front of the door at that time.
>>> I could hear her voice at the front of her door at that time.
I\'ve never forgot that day.
>>> I have never forgotten that day.
Since then I\'ve seen my sister more differently.
>>> Correct!
Also, sometimes I used to fight with her, I could remember that day.
>>> Also, when I sometimes fight with her, I remember that day.
I didn\'t do fighting with her.
>>> Because of that I avoid fighting with her.
Here\'s my writing.
I\'m looking forward to your resposes.
>>> I\'m looking forward to your feedback.
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