21/08/03 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think all athletes are doing well.
Among this athletes, I think Archery player Ann San is the best.
She not only won 3 Gold medals even though she is 21 years old in korean age but also she shot consecutively 10 points, 3 times.
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I think all athletes are doing well.
>> Correct
Among this athletes, I think Archery player Ann San is the best.
>> Among these athletes, I think archer Ann San is the best.
She not only won 3 Gold medals even though she is 21 years old in korean age but also she shot consecutively 10 points, 3 times.
>> Correct
Among this athletes, I think Archery player Ann San is the best.
>> Among these athletes, I think archer Ann San is the best.
She not only won 3 Gold medals even though she is 21 years old in korean age but also she shot consecutively 10 points, 3 times.
>> She not only won 3 gold medals even though she is 21 years old in Korean age but also she shot 10 points for 3 consecutive times.
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