21/08/04 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Sorry sharon I did my homework yesterday but I forgot uploading it
I think good things about motorcycles help us deliver quickly
And bad things about motorcycles are other than that
Among the bad things, I think the best is loud
Whenever I do my assignment in dormitory, I am stressed out
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for always being diligent.
I\'m sorry I couldn\'t see you today.
It was just raining so hard and an electricity post malfunctioned in my area.
I hope to see you tomorrow.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Sorry sharon I did my homework yesterday but I forgot uploading it
>> Sorry, Sharon. I did my homework yesterday but I forgot to upload it.
I think good things about motorcycles help us deliver quickly
>> I think the good thing about motorcycles is that it helps us deliver things quickly.
And bad things about motorcycles are other than that
>> There are also some bad things about motorcycles.
Among the bad things, I think the best is loud
>> Among these bad things, the noise they make is the worst.
Whenever I do my assignment in dormitory, I am stressed out
>> Sorry, Sharon. I did my homework yesterday but I forgot to upload it.
I think good things about motorcycles help us deliver quickly
>> I think the good thing about motorcycles is that it helps us deliver things quickly.
And bad things about motorcycles are other than that
>> There are also some bad things about motorcycles.
Among the bad things, I think the best is loud
>> Among these bad things, the noise they make is the worst.
Whenever I do my assignment in dormitory, I am stressed out
>> I feel stressed whenever I\'m trying to do my assignment in the dormitory.
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