21/08/05

2021-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Sharon, Can I upload today\'s assignment tomorrow? Because I can\'t find feedback menu when my first assignment already was uploaded 21/08/05 I think English listening is the most difficult part First, some nation\'s accent bothers me British and Australia is especially too hard Second, a prolonged sound make me pain I saw the Home Alone to study a prolonged sound Kevin\'s mom says, \"Kevin, what is it with you and Christmas trees?\" When I first heard it, my reaction was \"Wtf...\"

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]! 
I always enjoy your writing.
It\'s really honest and raw.
The details are on point as well.
Thank you for your composition today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think English listening is the most difficult part.
>> Correct
First, some nation\'s accent bothers me
>> First, some nations\' accents bother me.
British and Australia is especially too hard.
>> Correct
Second, a prolonged sound make me pain
>> Second, shortened sounds are really painful for me.
I saw the Home Alone to study a prolonged sound
>> I saw \"Home Alone\" to study shortened sounds.
Kevin\'s mom says, \"Kevin, what is it with you and Christmas trees?\"
>> Kevin\'s mom said, \"Kevin, what is it with you and Christmas trees?\"
When I first heard it, my reaction was \"Wtf...\"
>> Correct

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