21/08/11 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Sharon I\'m sorry I sent u the assignment late
Before checking my assignment, can you please check my questions
Question
Yesterday, I used the sentences that were \" I don\'t have some plans\"
But you gave me some feedback that were \"I haven\'t made a decision\"
Why did you give some feedback like that?
Assignment
I like watching mysteries Youtube
For example, It\'s about illuminatus, sector 51
I think some of these exaggerated
But it\'s really interesting
If you have extra time
I recommend those things!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for your question.
The correction is because the second sentence was more specific.
You were talking about what to buy with your birthday money.
It mans there are choices that you have to make.
That\'s why the word \"decision\" is better than \"plans.\"
We can discuss it more in class if you want.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like watching mysteries Youtube
>> I like watching mysteries on YouTube.
For example, It\'s about illuminatus, sector 51
>> For example, there\'s something about illuminatus, sector 51.
I think some of these exaggerated
>> I think some of those are exaggerated.
But it\'s really interesting
>> However, it\'s really interesting.
If you have extra time, I recommend those things!!
>> I like watching mysteries on YouTube.
For example, It\'s about illuminatus, sector 51
>> For example, there\'s something about illuminatus, sector 51.
I think some of these exaggerated
>> I think some of those are exaggerated.
But it\'s really interesting
>> However, it\'s really interesting.
If you have extra time, I recommend those things!!
>> Correct
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