21/08/17 homework
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Today\'s topic is too hard
Because It was painful time for the past 2 years,
I think every sense is important
But If I choice one, I think it is pain
Because I experienced two surgeries, I know too hard for me
And I don\'t want to experience not again
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Today\'s topic is too hard
>> It was hard for me to talk about today\'s topic.
Because It was painful time for the past 2 years,
>> It\'s because the past two years were really painful for me.
I think every sense is important.
>> Correct
But If I choice one, I think it is pain
>> However, if I have to choose one, I think it would be pain.
Because I experienced two surgeries, I know too hard for me
>> It\'s because I experienced two surgeries and I had a really hard time.
And I don\'t want to experience not again
>> It was hard for me to talk about today\'s topic.
Because It was painful time for the past 2 years,
>> It\'s because the past two years were really painful for me.
I think every sense is important.
>> Correct
But If I choice one, I think it is pain
>> However, if I have to choose one, I think it would be pain.
Because I experienced two surgeries, I know too hard for me
>> It\'s because I experienced two surgeries and I had a really hard time.
And I don\'t want to experience not again
>> I don\'t want to go through the same experience again.
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