21/08/18
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t know why some people dislike others who take selfies
It is just a private matter
But I think these people\'s matter is a lot of frequency
For example, some people go to work and take selfies
When somebody ask him or her \"Why do you take selfies?\", they say \"It\'s my first day\"
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Don\'t forget to use punctuation marks.
They are also essential in writing.
Your skills are improving every day.
The expression is clearer and more direct now.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t know why some people dislike others who take selfies.
>> Correct
It is just a private matter.
>> Correct
But I think these people\'s matter is a lot of frequency.
>> However, I think these people have a problem with its frequency.
For example, some people go to work and take selfies.
>> Correct
When somebody ask him or her \"Why do you take selfies?\", they say \"It\'s my first day\"
>> Correct
It is just a private matter.
>> Correct
But I think these people\'s matter is a lot of frequency.
>> However, I think these people have a problem with its frequency.
For example, some people go to work and take selfies.
>> Correct
When somebody ask him or her \"Why do you take selfies?\", they say \"It\'s my first day\"
>> When somebody asks him or her \"Why do you take selfies?\", they say \"It\'s my first day.\"
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