21/08/24

2021-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Assignment Actually, I don\'t be satisfied with the effort I\'m putting in my studies Because I don\'t focus my studies For example, I plan to study English Youtube, watching it in some channel that I often watch After a few minutes, I think \"There\'s more time than I thought\" And I watch other Youtube channels I\'m ashamed of myself, but this is the way it is these days Questions I heard the english newspaper in Power English homepage yesterday When I heard the second paragraph. I couldn\'t understand this sentence I heard well until \"The Seoul ~ 78\" but I couldn\'t understand pronunciation of this section \"kilometers of park paths\"

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]!

We\'ll discuss the article you listened to in class.

I\'m not sure what you\'re referring to.

Don\'t worry.

I\'m sure we\'ll figure it out.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

Actually, I don\'t be satisfied with the effort I\'m putting in my studies
>> Actually, I am not satisfied with the effort I\'m putting in my studies.
Because I don\'t focus my studies
>> It\'s because I don\'t focus on my studies.
For example, I plan to study English Youtube, watching it in some channel that I often watch
>> For example, I plan to study English through YouTube by watching a channel with such content.
After a few minutes, I think \"There\'s more time than I thought\"
>> After a few minutes, I usually think \"It\'s longer than I thought.\"
And I watch other Youtube channels
>> I also watch other YouTube channels.
I\'m ashamed of myself, but this is the way it is these days.

>> Correct

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