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2018-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to tell you about my favoirte actress. I like many actors, but I like Angelina Jolie the best. She has different character types. She also has a very unique face. I like her acting and all her movies. Among her movies, my favorite movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movies. She donates to many poor people to help them. Also she adopted her children and she loves them. Those are the reasons why I like her.

강사 첨삭

I want to tell you about my favoirte actress.
>> I want to tell you about my favorite actress.

or

>> Let me tell you about my favorite actress.
 I like many actors, but I like Angelina Jolie the best.

>> Correct
 She has different character types.

>> She has had different characters. 

or

>> She has had portrayed different
 She also has a very unique face.

>> Correct
 I like her acting and all her movies.

>> Correct
 Among her movies, my favorite movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movies.

>>  Correct
 She donates to many poor people to help them.

>> Correct

or

>> She has been helping and had donated to many poor people.
 Also she adopted her children and she loves them.

>> Correct

or

>> She also adopted children and loves them as her own.
 Those are the reasons why I like her.

>> These are the reasons why I like her.

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