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I want to tell you about my favoirte actress.
>> I want to tell you about my favorite actress.
or
>> Let me tell you about my favorite actress.
I like many actors, but I like Angelina Jolie the best.
>> Correct
She has different character types.
>> She has had different characters.
or
>> She has had portrayed different
She also has a very unique face.
>> Correct
I like her acting and all her movies.
>> Correct
Among her movies, my favorite movie is Mr. & Mrs. [Name] because I like action movies.
>> Correct
She donates to many poor people to help them.
>> Correct
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>> She has been helping and had donated to many poor people.
Also she adopted her children and she loves them.
>> Correct
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>> She also adopted children and loves them as her own.
Those are the reasons why I like her.
>> These are the reasons why I like her.
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