21 should be the legal driving age around the world

2017-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

I have not had any ideas about the limitation of driving below 21 years old people. I think the government has a reason to set the age for driving. I guess if people were not enough old, they might be careless and enjoy speed that can be caused big accident. I have searched the information regarding teenagers driving, according to the article car crashes are the leading cause of accidental death in young age groups. However, this can not be major reason to restrict driving below certain years old people. I believe that many teenagers can drive better than adults, but they can not afford to buy a car, fill gas up, pay insurance and taxes. I think if the country around world made a law, accidents would be reduced and save people from the accidents.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],


A MAJESTIC Monday to you again! ^.^


Well, I totally agree with you.

However, I really think that people should drive at the age of 21 and above, but when it comes to driving lessons, I strongly advice people who are 18 to 20 years old to learn driving.


That\'s all for this issue! ^^

See you later! ^^,


... Teacher Paula ... ^.~


P.S.: Thanks a lot for making your composition! ^^.



I have not had any ideas about the limitation of driving below 21 years old people.

>> I don\'t have any idea about the age limitation of driving which is below 21 years old.

>> OR: I don\'t have any idea about the limitation of driving to people who are below 21 years old.

I think the government has a reason to set the age for driving.

>> CORRECT!

I guess if people were not enough old, they might be careless and enjoy speed that can be caused big accident.

>> I guess if people are not old enough, they might be careless and enjoy speeding up that can cause big accidents.

I have searched the information regarding teenagers driving, according to the article car crashes are the leading cause of accidental death in young age groups.

>> I have searched some information regarding juvenile driving. According to the article, car crashes are the leading cause of accidental death in young aged groups.

However, this can not be major reason to restrict driving below certain years old people.

>> However, this can not be the major reason to restrict people who are below a certain age from driving.

I believe that many teenagers can drive better than adults, but they can not afford to buy a car, fill gas up, pay insurance and taxes.

>> CORRECT!

I think if the country around world made a law, accidents would be reduced and save people from the accidents.

>> I think if countries around the world made laws in relation to this matter, car related accidents would be reduced and save people from accidents.

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