21mar2025 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: What makes you like a song? The melody, the lyrics, or something else?
answer:
I think the first thing Melody needs to do is listen to it constantly. After that, I think the song gets better when I look for the lyrics and listen to the song while looking at the lyrics.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! I agree with you. The melody is what catches most people\'s attention but we could like it even more once we read the lyrics.
-T. Sonny
I think the first thing Melody needs to do is listen to it constantly. >>I think, the melody is the first thing that makes me like the song and listen to it constantly.
After that, I think the song gets better when I look for the lyrics and listen to the song while looking at the lyrics.
>>After that, I think the song gets better when I read the lyrics and listen to it at the same time.
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