21oct2024- homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: When was the last time you felt proud of yourself?
answer:
I think maybe I was bought my house. although I had somebody\'s debt.
I remember the moment when I signed to contract.
My husband and I had a hard time getting start because we have not enough money. I didn\'t thinked of buying house.
The time was maybe it turned 30. Among my sisters and friends, this is the first thing I do. I\'m really happy and proud.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! If I were you, I\'d be proud of myself, too. I guess it\'s true when people say: Do it scared. Do it anyway. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
I think maybe I was bought my house.
>>I think, it might be the time when I bought my house.
although I had somebody\'s debt.
>>Although, I was in debt at that time.
I remember the moment when I signed to contract.
I remember the moment when I signed to contract.
>>I remember the moment when I signed the contract.
My husband and I had a hard time getting start because we have not enough money.
My husband and I had a hard time getting start because we have not enough money.
>>My husband and I had a hard time starting because we didn\'t have enough money.
I didn\'t thinked of buying house.
>>I have never thought of buying a house.
The time was maybe it turned 30.
>>I have never thought of buying a house.
The time was maybe it turned 30.
>>Not until, I think, when I turned 30.
Among my sisters and friends, this is the first thing I do.
>>Among my sisters and friends, I was the first one who had done it.
I\'m really happy and proud.
>>I am ecstatic and proud.
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