21th of November
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Chopper!
Long time, no write!^6^
How does it feel to write again in English?^^
I guess it\'s really exciting.
I\'ll see you again in our class and be prepared.^^
--- T. Anne
21th of November 2012
>> 21st of November 2012
I keeping a diary in english after for a long time..
>> I\'m keeping a diary in English again after a long time.
I was very busy with bid these day.
>> Correct!
Our company was going to submit the bid in today..
>> Our company is going to submit the bid today.
I have to finish the estimate report by yesterday.
>> Correct!
So I was overwork till yesterday..
>> I was overworked yesterday.
Finally I was had to finish the reoprt and our company submit a bid to contracting agency.
>> Finally, I had to finish the report and our company will submit a bid to a contracting agency.
In a result, our company was failed the this bid.
>> In the result, our company failed the bid.
But I never regreted, because I was brought out my best in that situation.
>> I don\'t have a regret because I brought out my best in that situation.
Nowadays, the bid method was apply to lowest total amount in korea.
>> Nowadays, the bid method applies to the lowest total amount in Korea.
I think that it isn\'t suitable for the bid method.
>> Correct!
because this method will bring construction company in much debt into this project.
>> Since this method will bring the construction company in much debt because of this project.
In other words, it will has to much debt from the bank when the project finished.
>> In other words, it will have too much debt from the bank when the project is finished.
I am looking forward to amend as soon as possible.
>> Correct!
I will waiting until a big opportunity comes up.
>> I will wait until a big opportunity comes up.
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