22/10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.It is a serious offence to desert the army.
2.The area was mind for gold since 1900.
3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain guerrilla groups in Rwanda.
4.A friar is a type of monk.
5.A mussel is a type of shellfish.
강사 첨삭
Just check on my correction for the 2nd number. Nonetheless, you did a fine job Ms. [이름]. Have loads of rest today. :)
T. Aurora
1.It is a serious offence to desert the army.>>Correct!2.The area was mind for gold since 1900.>>mined3.Diane Fossey was famous for her work with the mountain guerrilla groups in Rwanda.>>Correct!4.A friar is a type of monk.>>Correct!5.A mussel is a type of shellfish.
>>Correct!
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