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My family visited Seoul last weekend.
We met my sister in law's family for a dinner.
We went out and had sushi and many other foods.
We often see each other because we are all very busy.
So we talked about many things.
My father in law became the center of our conversation.
He is still very stong and healthy despite his age.
We had to take care of him for his future.
We decided that we will save some money together.
She also gave my children some presents.
My children looked happy.
We spent enjoyable time together.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You outdid yourself today! Some reminders:
1. Notice the dash in between. sister-in-law\'s
2. Notice the difference.
We seldom see each other because we are all very busy.
We often see each other because we are not very busy.
Teacher Venus^^
My family visited Seoul last weekend.
>>>CORRECT
We met my sister in law\'s family for a dinner.
>>>We met my sister-in-law\'s family for a dinner.
We went out and had sushi and many other foods.
>>>CORRECT
We often see each other because we are all very busy.
>>>did you mean: We seldom see each other because we are all very busy.
So we talked about many things.
>>>CORRECT
My father in law became the center of our conversation.
>>>CORRECT
He is still very stong and healthy despite his age.
>>>CORRECT
We had to take care of him for his future.
>>>CORRECT
We decided that we will save some money together.
>>>CORRECT
She also gave my children some presents.
>>>CORRECT
My children looked happy.
>>>CORRECT
We spent enjoyable time together.
>>>We spent an enjoyable time together.
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