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2018-11-14 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

You will visit my house tomorrow. It is the first for you to visit my house. I recommend you to drive your car. And then you can meet me after an hour. But if you will take the bus, it will take two hours. When you arrive at the bus station, I will wait for you there. My house is located near the bus station. You call me 5minutes ago Before you arrive at the bus station. See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

You will visit my house tomorrow.

>> Correct
 It is the first for you to visit my house.

>> Correct

or

>> It is going to be your first time to visit my house.
 I recommend you to drive your car.

>> Correct
 And then you can meet me after an hour.

>> Correct
 But if you will take the bus, it will take two hours.

>> Correct

or

>> However, if you will take the bus, it will take you two hours.
 When you arrive at the bus station, I will wait for you there.

>> Correct
 My house is located near the bus station.

>> Correct
 You call me 5minutes ago Before you arrive at the bus station.

>> You can call me five minutes before you arrive at the bus station.
 See you tomorrow.


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