22 Jau, homework

2019-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1. (Both) were tired, so they decided to get some rest. 2. I don\'t like (both) of them. 3. I can\'t decide between these two dresses. I like them (either). 4. (Neither) Maya nor Ann passed the test. 5. (Neither) the manager nor his subordinates could give a satisfactory explanation. and Please see if this is the correct sentence.♥ Why do you want to work in a hotel? : when i worked at the front department in LOTTE hotel, i felt this job is like the owner of a hotel. i think they know everything about hotel and it explains to the customers. so i always study hard and try. i became as proud of my job as i have tried. That\'s why l\'m facinated with this job. what\'s your major? : my major is social welfare. my mother is social worker, she always helps weak person and trying to make them have a better life. when i saw her, i wanted to help someone too.

강사 첨삭

Happy Day, [이름]!  

Perseverance is what we need to achieve a goal in life. Studying could be very tough at times but through hard work, you can see yourself speaking the language well.

T. Jeny


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1. (Both) were tired, so they decided to get some rest.
>>correct
2. I don\'t like (both) of them.
>> I don\'t like either of them.
3. I can\'t decide between these two dresses. I like them (either).
>>I can\'t decide between these two dresses. I like them both.
4. (Neither) Maya nor Ann passed the test.
>>correct
5. (Neither) the manager nor his subordinates could give a satisfactory explanation.
>>correct
and Please see if this is the correct sentence.♥
>>Please, check if the sentences are correct.
Why do you want to work in a hotel?

>>correct
 : when i worked at the front department in LOTTE hotel, i felt this job is like the owner of a hotel.

>>When I worked at LOTTE Hotel I was assigned as a front desk clerk so I felt like I was the owner of the hotel.
 i think they know everything about hotel and it explains to the customers.

>>I think they know everything about the hotel and explain it to the customers.
 so i always study hard and try.

>>So I always try to study hard.
 i became as proud of my job as i have tried.

>>I feel proud of myself working hard.

That\'s why l\'m facinated with this job.
>>That\'s why I am fascinated by this kind of job.
what\'s your major?
>>correct
: my major is social welfare.

>>I majored in Social Welfare.

my mother is social worker, she always helps weak person and trying to make them have a better life.

>>My mother is a social worker and she always helps weak people and tries to assist them in having a better life.
 when i saw her, i wanted to help someone too.

>>Whenever I see her, I also wanted to be like her too, helping other people.





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