22nd March
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Go for it SPRING!
Thanks for writing this!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
Teacher Shanee^^,
QUOTE FOR THE DAY:
\"Quietly endure, silently suffer and patiently wait.\"~Martin Luther King, Jr.
HOMEWORK:
Composition writing!
In not more than ten sentences, write an essay about the movie that inspired you.
The memorable movie that have ever inspired me is that \"Remember me\"
>>> The memorable movie that has inspired me is \"Remember Me.\"
I watched the movie lately.
>>> Correct!
The impressed part of that is that protagonist who wanted to be a singer playing the guitar went to the heaven looking for the popular singer passed away.
>>> The impressive part of that movie is when the protagonist who wanted to be a singer who plays a guitar went to heaven to look for a popular singer who passed away.
He ended up meeting the singer and dreamed of being singer.
>>> Correct!
Even though his family obstructed him, he did what he like to do.
>>> Even though his family obstructed him / opposed his decision, he did what he likes to do.
Autully I think I would lack of that personality he has such as persistence.
>>> Actually, I think I lack persistence unlike the protagonist.
But I\'ll be able to overcome my vulnerable characteristic and then I have persistence.
>>> But I am sure that I have the will to overcome my vulnerable characteristic and develop persistence.
Especially, When teaching for some students I need to inspire them persistently.
>>> I really need it because when I am teaching some students, I need to inspire them persistently.
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