22nov2024- homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Writing task: What is your before-bed routine? Is there something you need to do in order to sleep?
answer: I turn the vaccum, wash the dishes,empty the cat\'s bathroom.
I need to complete these tasks before I go to bed so that I can sleep comfortably
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! I think you get a sense of calm and order when the area around you is clean and tidy. I agree that knowing that everything is in order may bring peace of mind, contributing to better rest.
-T. Sonny
I turn the vaccum, wash the dishes,empty the cat\'s bathroom.
>>I run the vacuum, wash the dishes, and empty the cat litter.
I need to complete these tasks before I go to bed so that I can sleep comfortably.
I need to complete these tasks before I go to bed so that I can sleep comfortably.
>>Correct!
OR. I need to take care of these tasks before bed for a good night’s sleep.
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