22th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
A parents expect their children not only grade but also many things and it is natural.
But the most important they have to know is that their grade depends on their effort.
Because a parents don't want to be disappointed in their children, they usually blame others.
In fact, if I am parent I also might do like them.
In this reason, I understand them somewhat.
So to begin with, I will make them calm down and then I will say them their children's level and attitude in class in detail.
Moreover, I will explain how to improve their grade to them.
After they completely listen to me, they can understand their reason of grade.
I am alright because it's my job although such a process will be hard for me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Parents are specially sensitive about their children\'s grades so it would be best if parents understand the grading system at the beginning of the semester. That\'s what I did when I was still a classroom teacher.
~T. Lynn
A parents expect their children not only grade but also many things and it is natural.
>> Parents expect their children not only to have high grades but also many things and that is only natural.
But the most important they have to know is that their grade depends on their effort.
>> correct!
Because a parents don\'t want to be disappointed in their children, they usually blame others.
>> Parents don\'t want to be disappointed with their children so they usually blame others. (It\'s not advisable to start your sentence with because)
In fact, if I am parent I also might do like them.
>> In fact, if I am a parent I also might do the same.
In this reason, I understand them somewhat.
>> For this reason, I somewhat understand them.
So to begin with, I will make them calm down and then I will say them their children\'s level and attitude in class in detail.
>> First, I will calm them down and then I will tell them their children\'s level and attitude/behavior in class in detail.
Moreover, I will explain how to improve their grade to them.
>> Moreover, I will explain how their children could improve their grades.
After they completely listen to me, they can understand their reason of grade.
>> After my explanation, they will fully understand their children\'s grades.
I am alright because it\'s my job although such a process will be hard for me.
>> Although this is a hard process, I\'m willing to do it since it\'s part of my job as a teacher.
Parents are specially sensitive about their children\'s grades so it would be best if parents understand the grading system at the beginning of the semester. That\'s what I did when I was still a classroom teacher.
~T. Lynn
A parents expect their children not only grade but also many things and it is natural.
>> Parents expect their children not only to have high grades but also many things and that is only natural.
But the most important they have to know is that their grade depends on their effort.
>> correct!
Because a parents don\'t want to be disappointed in their children, they usually blame others.
>> Parents don\'t want to be disappointed with their children so they usually blame others. (It\'s not advisable to start your sentence with because)
In fact, if I am parent I also might do like them.
>> In fact, if I am a parent I also might do the same.
In this reason, I understand them somewhat.
>> For this reason, I somewhat understand them.
So to begin with, I will make them calm down and then I will say them their children\'s level and attitude in class in detail.
>> First, I will calm them down and then I will tell them their children\'s level and attitude/behavior in class in detail.
Moreover, I will explain how to improve their grade to them.
>> Moreover, I will explain how their children could improve their grades.
After they completely listen to me, they can understand their reason of grade.
>> After my explanation, they will fully understand their children\'s grades.
I am alright because it\'s my job although such a process will be hard for me.
>> Although this is a hard process, I\'m willing to do it since it\'s part of my job as a teacher.
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