22th July

2011-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Today I learned the idiomatic expression of 'sit back'. During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home. When I compare with other people, I am busier and have a hard working. So, it's not easy to take a rest peacefully at home. But, If I have the chance to rest, I just do nothing and watch TV. I am a father and a husband in my family. They expect my holiday to have the time together. During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home. Despite knowing, I didn’t do anything. I must have some planning to do with my family members from now on. At first I am going to do something tommorrow without going to work.

강사 첨삭

Hi! You did a good job in writing this! You were able to share how you feel and what you plan to do to change that behavior. I hope you can share some time with your family this weekend! T. Faye   Today I learned the idiomatic expression of 'sit back'. >> Today I learned the idiomatic expression 'sit back'.During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home. >> During class, I felt so ashamed because of my behavior at home.When I compare with other people, I am busier and have a hard working. >> When I compare with other people, I am busier and I work harder. So, it's not easy to take a rest peacefully at home. >>CORRECT OR>> So, it's not easy to rest peacefully at home. But, If I have the chance to rest, I just do nothing and watch TV. >>CORRECT OR>> But, If I have the chance to rest, I don뭪 do anything and watch TV.I am a father and a husband in my family. >>CORRECT They expect my holiday to have the time together. >> They expect us to have time together during my holidays.During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home. >> While having a class, I felt so ashamed because of my behavior at home.Despite knowing, I didn’t do anything. >>CORRECTI must have some planning to do with my family members from now on. >> I must have some plan to do with my family members from now on.At first I am going to do something tommorrow without going to work. >>First I am going to do something tomorrow without going to work.

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