22th July
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I learned the idiomatic expression of 'sit back'.
During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home.
When I compare with other people, I am busier and have a hard working.
So, it's not easy to take a rest peacefully at home. But, If I have the chance to rest, I just do nothing and watch TV.
I am a father and a husband in my family. They expect my holiday to have the time together.
During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home.
Despite knowing, I didn’t do anything.
I must have some planning to do with my family members from now on.
At first I am going to do something tommorrow without going to work.
강사 첨삭
Hi!
You did a good job in writing this! You were able to share how you feel and what you plan
to do to change that behavior. I hope you can share some time with your family this weekend!
T. Faye
Today I learned the idiomatic expression of 'sit back'.
>> Today I learned the idiomatic expression 'sit back'.During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home.
>> During class, I felt so ashamed because of my behavior at home.When I compare with other people, I am busier and have a hard working.
>> When I compare with other people, I am busier and I work harder.
So, it's not easy to take a rest peacefully at home.
>>CORRECT
OR>> So, it's not easy to rest peacefully at home.
But, If I have the chance to rest, I just do nothing and watch TV.
>>CORRECT
OR>> But, If I have the chance to rest, I don뭪 do anything and watch TV.I am a father and a husband in my family.
>>CORRECT
They expect my holiday to have the time together.
>> They expect us to have time together during my holidays.During having a class, I felt so shame because of my behavior at home.
>> While having a class, I felt so ashamed because of my behavior at home.Despite knowing, I didn’t do anything.
>>CORRECTI must have some planning to do with my family members from now on.
>> I must have some plan to do with my family members from now on.At first I am going to do something tommorrow without going to work.
>>First I am going to do something tomorrow without going to work.
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