23 September
학생이 쓴 원문
ESSAY: How do you find our class today?
As it was the first day of our class, I was a little nervous and I was feeling so sorry for missing the class yesterday. But It was great and I was more determined to study hard again.
What are your expectations from this course?
I want to improve speaking English. Also I need to get 6.5 level in IELTS test.
I’m lucky to meet a excellent English teacher like you.
Do you have any suggestions on how you want us to deal with our classes?
First, I don’t have any idea on the way how we deal with our classes right now.
As we are going on our class, if I come up with any ideas, I will tell you those.
When are you going to take the IELTS?
I will take the test as quickly as possible because I want to examine my IELTS level.
And I will take the test frequently. Of course It costs me a lot. TT;
강사 첨삭
What a wonderful surprise from you [이름]! Thank you so much for dropping by our composition board. Your words are even so nice. I feel like you are pulling my leg. How was your first experience posting your composition here? I can say that this is pretty well-made. I simply have some recommendations below. Keep on writing [이름]!!!
We better keep up with your practice then, so you can reach what you are aiming for. I will help you the best way I can.
Enjoy the rest of the day!
_Klein
ESSAY: How do you find our class today?As it was the first day of our class, I was a little nervous and I was feeling so sorry for missing the class yesterday.
>>Correct
But It was great and I was more determined to study hard again.
>>But it was great and I am more determined to study hard again.What are your expectations from this course?I want to improve speaking English. Also I need to get 6.5 level in IELTS test.
>>CorrectI’m lucky to meet a excellent English teacher like you. >>I\'m lucky to meet an excellent English teacher like you.
Do you have any suggestions on how you want us to deal with our classes?First, I don’t have any idea on the way how we deal with our classes right now.
>>Correct
As we are going on our class, if I come up with any ideas, I will tell you those.>>As we go on with our class/classes, if I come up with any ideas, I will tell you those.
>>As we go on with our classes, if I come up with any ideas, I will let you know.When are you going to take the IELTS?I will take the test as quickly as possible because I want to examine my IELTS level.
And I will take the test frequently. Of course It costs me a lot. TT;
>>Correct!
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