23oct2024 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Do you and your friends lend money to each other? How much are you willing to lend or borrow?
-answer:
Basically I have a low expectation of human because I think as per situation can change always. I don\'t like borrow money to friend, but I intend to do lend.
If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn\'t receive it.
For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I hasn\'t wallet so in this case, I borrow money from my friend, I will transper money an account right there.
If I don\'t deposit money right there, I\'ll forget it, so I didn\'t believe it myself.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! There\'s nothing wrong with borrowing money but we should know the responsibility that comes with it. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
Basically I have a low expectation of human because I think as per situation can change always.
>>Basically, I have low expectations of people because I think the situation constantly changes.
I don\'t like borrow money to friend, but I intend to do lend.
>>I don\'t like borrowing money from my friends but I tend to lend money.
If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn\'t receive it.
>>If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn\'t receive it back.
For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I hasn\'t wallet so in this case, I borrow money from my friend, I will transper money an account right there.
>>For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I don\'t have my wallet, I would borrow money from my friend, but would transfer it to their accounts right there.
If I don\'t deposit money right there, I\'ll forget it, so I didn\'t believe it myself.
>>I don\'t like borrowing money from my friends but I tend to lend money.
If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn\'t receive it.
>>If I were to lend money to someone, I would lend it with the mindset that I wouldn\'t receive it back.
For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I hasn\'t wallet so in this case, I borrow money from my friend, I will transper money an account right there.
>>For example, If I go to lunch with my friend but I don\'t have my wallet, I would borrow money from my friend, but would transfer it to their accounts right there.
If I don\'t deposit money right there, I\'ll forget it, so I didn\'t believe it myself.
>>If I don\'t, I\'ll forget it, so I do not trust myself.
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