23th home work
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Hello Diana!!!
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Hello,
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>>I\'m sorry, I\'m late.
ESSAY:
What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.
I think a good supervisor must have discernment and leadership.
>>correct
He or she will need many good supporters to lead the company.
>>correct
So he or she has to find a proper person who will help to them.
>>So, he or she has to find a proper person who will help him.
With powerful leadership, he or she will listen their helpers and makes some good differences.
>>With powerful leadership, he or she will listen to their employees and will make a difference.
That\'s why I think so.
>>That\'s my opinion.
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